MisterThien

Hey, Gracie! Oooh, high-five for our newness on YWS! Though, I've known about this site since 2009 and I have an old account that I made then, but I forgot ...

Hey, Gracie! Oooh, high-five for our newness on YWS! Though, I've known about this site since 2009 and I have an old account that I made then, but I forgot ...

Hello! :) Hahaha, I liked this poem! A very funny ending that I didn't expect at all really :D It made me smile and that's an achievement right there! Keep ...

OH DAMN. This is a hard one. I'd probably marry him. It would be too much for me to have to raise, feed, bathe little Biebers and tell people that ...

That awkward moment when two people post the same 'unfortunate' comment within the same minute LOL Let's dismiss mine since mine was second and I'll do a 'fortunate' one :) ...

Unfortunately, the 'real life' you just obtained used to belong to a Russian woman called Anouska Belinsky, who wanted it back.

Hey, people! :) I've been registered to YWS for a few weeks now and I've found it such a great place! There's something I love about reviewing people's work and ...

Hey, Angel! :) When I read this piece of work, to me, it sounded more like a blurb than anything else. Is it a blurb? Or an excerpt from the ...

Heey again, Emiloo! :) Okay, so starting with the nitpicks: You're missing an apostrophe here: They were a colour id never seen before. I think this would be better separated ...

Hello again! :) Sorry, I just realised that you are new to YWS! Very new, actually! Well, here's my welcome: WELCOME, PERSON! :D If you have any questions or anything ...

Hello, Milaita! :) I'll start the review with the nitpicks! There is need of a space here: ... face."I'll be back?! What... Replace the first full stop with a comma: ...

Hello, Mares! :) So I'll start with a few nitpicks I found: my parents doesn't don't love me and such. I though this was slightly confusing, so perhaps rephrase it ...

Hey, Emiloo! :) As with every review I do, I'll start off with the little nitpicks that I recognised! So here they are: Its garden s was full of blossom ...

Hello! :) I'm here to review this second chapter now! First, I'll start with the little nitpicks: 'Tommy and I' As me and Tommy entered... Tense change here with the ...

Hello! :) Interesting poem. I quite liked its rhyming scheme; it gave the poem rhythm and made it easier to read, though I did notice a few problems! I think ...