MissingAngel

This is beautiful. It flows very nicely and is overall really good. Great imagery but try using other words to describe the rain. Why do the same drops that persuade ...

I really liked it! Your writing style is great and this was very well written. There were a few spelling errors here and there but overall it was really good! ...

I thought this was a beautiful, joyful story. The introduction was good and grabbed my attention. Just a few little things I noticed though. "Sir, I've got some very important ...

I think this is pretty good so far. There were a few parts that confused me or just sounded a bit awkward. First, there was the whole music box thing. ...

I think this has a really good plot and has great potential. I think it could have flowed a little bit better in the beginning, like if you had added ...

Thank you for the welcome SymlinG. :) This site is pretty big and I'm somewhat overwhelmed by it. Thanks for the advice about getting to know the site and the ...

I haven't read the first draft of this but I really enjoyed this one. I liked the conversation between her and Tristan ( I'm so sorry if I spelled that ...

Thank you for the welcome :) So everyone just reviews other people's work on Review days? I like writing Romance and recently I've been getting into Sci-fi. I haven't written ...

Hi :) I'm new here and my name's Kehau. I was just wondering if anyone wanted to talk or explain this site to me?

Hi. My name's Kehau and I'm new :)