MissRockers

This is great; filled with lots of emotions. I like it when people really feel what they are writing, and aren't just writing about something they can't personally relate to. ...

Hahaha, such a good little story! I liked it a lot. :)

I do understand what you are saying to the readers, and you make it very very clear, which is great. One thing I would have to agree with, is to ...

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This is actually a poem that I came up with at about 11:00 at night, just thinking about what I was feeling, and what lots of people probably also feel ...

Wow, these are really great, the first one is pretty good, maybe just a little too dark. The second one is my absolute favorite, because it's very very interesting, and ...

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I agree with what RoseGryffindor has to say, especially about making Shinin' and burnin' into their -ing endings. I love how you completely turn the meaning of this poem from ...

This is a really good picture. I like it because all of us are just wondering what this girl is looking at. The clouds are a good clue though; maybe ...

Wow. What a fantastic job you have done. You have some outstanding talent. Just a couple of things from my opinion: The first picture really stands out, and is quite ...

I believe the 3rd picture is the greatest. It definitely shows the lights and darks of the cat, and it's a very good balance of them both. There is not ...

Perfect poem to cheer people up! I like it a lot. It's the perfect length too, short and sweet.