MissRockers

Wonderful! This is exactly what a lot of people go through in their life. People look at us with expectations, and if we don't live up to them, we're basically ...

Wow!!!! You don't know how much I can relate to this!!! I enjoyed reading this very much. Although, I do agree with the other comments, I think the poem could ...

Good job. I liked this. Now, onto my critique! Well, as far as the plot goes, there wasn't much of a real deep plot. It was kind of shallow. It ...

Well, maybe if there were more complete sentences, with less adjectives it would make sense. Now, I'm very confused, I did not get any of the poem, at all. I'm ...

Very simple and good! It really tells the reader how it feels like to be in it. Don't worry, you're not alone, I've been there done THAT! Gratefully, I'm sort ...

YES YES YES!!! This is wonderful. I completely agree with everything you are trying to get across to the reader. In all of these HORRIBLE times, people always wonder where ...

Hahaha, thank you so much. I DEFINITELY will write a happy poem! Oh, and thanks, I hate typos!

I put this into narrative poetry. I felt it belonged there more! It really does tell a story.

What a beautiful poem! I really don't have any constructive criticism. I actually liked it better when it did not rhymn for this particular poem. you'll still hold my heart ...

Overall, I love the message of this poem, but, there might be some things you need to work on. First of all, the length of this poem is very short, ...

Yep, thanks everyone for the great reviews! I took some of your advice, and I believe it has really improved my piece overall! Thanks again! :)

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Great great great!!! What you're feeling now is what I've felt a lot in the past also. It hurts the most when the people closest to us, hurt us, even ...

I really loved this poem because truthfully, this speaks to us all. Actually, to me, I especially liked the first two lines of this poem. But, I agree that I ...

This is a great poem. One thing that I think it might be missing is more explanation, but, I'm sure you're thinking some of this information is just common sense, ...