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Re: Pull the Trigger
Jessa, first of all, I am terribly sorry for your loss. Now, these first comments have picked up on the grammar aspect of this, but, I will stick with the ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: This is Me
YES YES YES! I love it! I can relate to this SO MUCH!!! And, this just proves the point that ...it's very hard to let your TRUE emotions show. Just ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Best Friend..yeah right
I truly thank all of you guys. God is all of the love and support I will ever need. And, so are you guys!! It's what keeps me goin'!
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Beneath the Smile
Thanks so much! What I've realized throughout this year especially is that God will be there for everyone, no matter WHAT. We just have to be reminded of that all ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Unknown Love
Wow. I like this a lot because it really lets the reader know how difficult it is to tell a person the truth! Just the honest truth! The poem is ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Manipulate. Criticize. Forget.
I like this poem because you really don't need to explain much of anything at ALL. These chosen words give so much emotion. Wow. This is something I have to ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: My brother (:
This is beautiful. You captured the moment perfectly! I like how the water ..(or the angle) isn't perfectly straight. To me, it looks like it's sort of at an angle. ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Two-Faced
I think a lot of people have picked up on the grammar aspect of this. But, some nitpicks are: After your periods, sometimes you don't capitalize the next letter of ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Best Friend..yeah right
K, thanks for your tips! Haha, yep, I agree busy people definitely get old!
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Once You Were My Best Friend
WOW....you don't even KNOW how much I can relate to this!!!! My once best friend now treats me like nothing....we're complete strangers, even though we're in two classes together, and ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Black Hole
This is really good!! i enjoyed it a lot. I wouldn't say I enjoyed it, but it made me think very hard, and i connected with it. I'm sure one ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: A Letter To God...
Oh yes, I really liked this. It made me very sad. It's so very hard to love yourself for who you are, but, when you do, then others will see ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Life's Empty Path
Oh, and another thing, about the length. I think it was a great length for this particular poem. But, if you ever find the time to make a longer poem ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Life's Empty Path
Wooow, for this certain little poem, I LOVED IT!! It was so straight to the point and clear. Basically, you need to find true happiness. Personally, I think the length ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Suffering of the World
First of all, I love this. It sums up a lot of the questions people have about suffering. Lots of people I know come up to me and ask, how ...
Mar 31, 2011
