MissRockers

Oh, this is such a great poem. I share SO much empathy with you. We are in the same shoes my friend. Now the nitpicks: After I read this poem, ...

Oh wow, wonderful. I really liked this. Isn't it terribly sad how some of us put so much into relationships, and we fight so hard, but, in the end, we ...

Great job with this poem. Again, this is something that everyone can relate to. The flow was good, and overall, everything sounded wonderful. Keep writing beautiful poetry.

Yay! Now I can say the same thing about your poem. It rhymes!!!! haha, don't you feel a sense of accomplishment after you get done with a poem or story? ...

I pretty much liked it, but it was very short. Too short actually. I wanted to hear more about your childhood with this friend, and what happened as you grew ...

This poem really captures the MEANING behind "why do people write?" It's because they need and want people to hear what they have to say. Excellent job portraying this. Until ...

Yes! Amen. This reminds me SO much of my poem. Seriously. It really does. It's talking about a mask that you both put on. Although your mask stays the same ...

Ah, yeah, punctuation does make things very different. I'm glad you can make that choice by yourself though. That's great. I'm so proud of you for being strong. Just keep ...

First of all, this poem is great. My heart just split open for you! I just wanted to give you a hug, or SOMETHING! And, before I get into the ...

When we first met each other, we were naive and very young. The two of us were different, but we always had such fun. Opposites attract is what they all ...

I just wanted to say that I love this poem! The last two lines for me were the best! :)

I could sense the yearning for love, even though it might be considered sacrilege by others. Also, I could sense, you were yearning for One who would accept you no ...

Another thing I wanted to mention. You chose a great title for this. It grabbed LOTS of people's attention. You named it perfectly!

First of all, I loved the rhyming. It added another level to it! About the feeling behind this, I share empathy with you. I have been there! In my life, ...

Whoa, good job on letting the reader know exactly how you feel. Believe me, I've been there before! And yes, right after the friendship ends, it's when it hurts the ...