MissRockers

Haha, lele253isme pretty much summed up what I was thinking too...but, much shorter. :) It's just a sea of facts.

I think mainly what you REALLY need to do here, is not just give us all the facts, REALLY ELABORATE, and explain more and more about each character. Because, you ...

I loved this!!! The emotions and meaning of this effected me deeply. I have gone through the same thing. And, it feels great to just let it all out, doesn't ...

Thanks. I just added another stanza. I completely agreed with your suggestion.

For those of you who feel all alone in the world, please ask Jesus to help. It's different for everyone, but He sure helped me! I once put my hope ...

Ok, first, I'm not too sure about the punctuation, or capitalization, or anything like that! It was just one huge thing...without a period. But, I think sometimes poems don't necessarily ...

hahaha. you know what? I started smiling at the very first two lines! :) Probably because I don't say torso very much. I really don't have any MAJOR issues with ...

Good job capturing the complete dark side of friendship. It's not just fine and dandy all the time, it hurts a lot too. But, we just push on with our ...

Wow. This was deeeeeeep. Such good vocabulary is embedded in this also,in every line. I'd rather run from my thoughts more often than not, than be antagonized by the agonizing ...

I was told by a person. So, now, I love this site so much, I can't help but tell others to join!! I've told a lot, and those who have ...

Oh wow. I love this!!!! What Wondrous Love is This....(reminds me of that song.) You pretty much explained my quote from C.S. Lewis...on my signature below. Jesus shouts to us ...

I liked reading this poem, but I agree with some of the comments above mine. I think it REALLY needs more explanation, and describing WHY you are happy, why we ...

For some reason, I kept thinking that this poem could very easily become a song!! Have you thought about that?? I think it would be great. But, as far as ...

This is about God right?? I'm just wondering! Never did you mention it, but, that's my assumption.I might be wrong though. lol. K, time for nitpicks: I am caught in ...

This is such a sweet poem. I'm glad you feel this way. I wish everyone would. Life would be so much easier. But, of course, life's not fair, and it's ...