MissRockers

The descriptions were excellent. I kind of wish it was a bit longer, but, the ending was wonderful. A blank canvas Waiting to be filled with dreams. I kind of ...

The emotions throughout this were great. You spoke straight from your heart. Though it is on my heart it won’t help me live my life. Vanish from my memory, Be ...

Like the other reviews stated already, this is a tough subject. Here are some of my critiques: In a bed of darkness my mind sleeps. Well, if this person is ...

I loved this so much. I could just hear you crying out for them to hear your desperate call. The opening was BY FAR the best in the entire poem. ...

This was the sweetest poem I've ever read before! And I mean that. The only word that I rarely hear is I had to look it up. But, I actually ...

ooo, I loved this so much! I must admit that now I’m lost. There is no passage back, no retribution. No longer can I hope to save myself. Those were ...

My favorite part was this: To keep together I do not cry Tears are my glue And I must stay dry Now onto the nit picks: And I must stay ...

When I was reading this, I couldn't help but smile. I could just picture myself...and everyone else on a school morning when our alarm blazes on! Ugggh, horrible! I think ...

Hey, thanks everyone for the good tips!! Could anyone be so kind as to just tell me exactly which parts in particular the flow doesn't work, or where it's choppy. ...

This is dedicated for all of you who had someone very close to you just leave you on your own, done something to make you feel bad about yourself, never ...

This is one of the best piece of writing I've seen today!!! I LOVED IT! There aren't words to describe how true this is. And, the even greater thing, is ...

Hmm, let's see. It was very good. It did tell the reader to never ever give up, and every time you write something, it gets better and better. Very good ...

Great job, I loved this. Yeah, I kind of agree with one of the reviews before mine. The topic of using the key to your heart is very cliche. But, ...

I see that you've fixed the capitalization! :) Looks much better.

I really don't have anything punctuation or capitalization wise. Good job with that. The rhyming scheme was okay, although in a few parts, it didn't seem to flow. Before we ...