MissMadHatter

Heya, I really like your Twilight/Harry Potter parody. Many people have commented on your punctuation and grammar, and even though it may not be intentional, I think it adds to ...

This was so touching- I'm in tears now after reading it and I don't usually cry from reading. I'm going to have to read more of your work! It was ...

Honestly, I quite like it, very dark but interesting. The ending, though, brightens the mood ever so slightly.

Hey, I really like your idea of Lily Evan's diary. The only thing i have to say is some spelling and grammar mistakes, but other than that keep writing because ...

The rhyming was really good, I like the flow of it in my mind whilst reading it. Rhyming is good :)

Wicked. I loved it. "Voldie" is classic and its funny how you just decided to throw Hermione in at the end! I love writing parody like stories like this. ;oD

I really liked your poem. Its full of description and you used great similies and metaphores! Write more so I can read them!!!

I wrote this whilst bored and used it as my first post. Light was nonexistent. Darkness fell never, for there was no where to fall. The world was dark, and ...