MissGangamash

Hello! I am absolutely loving that you guys are really connecting to Wallace and his voice. As this whole novel is basically a character study of him, it is very ...

Hello! I like the link you made from Wallace talking about his drawings to Wallace himself. I hadn't even thought of that! But it's true, with being a jester, Wallace ...

Hello! I make sure when I edit to mention in the flashback at what stage it is at But also the reason Kaspar wanted to clarify Wallace's name is because ...

Hello! Yes, this chapter is the start of the main unease and tension in the story. Glad you felt it brewing up :D Because this part is quite long, the ...

Hello! I'll have a look at the dinner scene and add some more details. I'm still trying to find the balance with the flashbacks. I don't want them too long ...

Hello! Wallace is much more at ease with other people than he is with Kaspar and I'm glad you noticed the way he changes depending on who he is around. ...

THANK YOU! Of course! I aim to upload every Saturday :)

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Hello! Oh most definitely, Wallace has sort of turned himself into a caricature, where he changes to fit the people around him. Glad that's come through! I wanted Wallace and ...

Hello! It was really interesting reading your review because you are the only one who hasn't read from the beginning - and all your assumptions are pretty spot on! The ...

Hello! I really wanted to write Kaspar as kind of a lovable himbo haha. He is very much a prince and wants to do right by his people, but at ...

Hello! I love how you've described Kaspar, and I agree. He knows the weight his title holds but when he's with Wallace, he can drop all that even if it ...

They say the eyes are the windows to the soul so what does that mean for Wallace's? I've written another novel that focuses on the relationship between the two main ...

Hello! Wallace most definitely has mixed feelings about being the 'dirty little secret' - it is thrilling at times but also fills him with a lot of self-doubt. Being a ...

Hello again! The melancholy within Wallace's narration is intentional, and you hit the nail on the head about Wallace struggling with his sense of self. He is also trying to ...