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Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 2)
Hello! Wallace is most confident when he is playing a part, so revealing his true feelings is something far too real and personal for him to give so freely. There ...
Jan 29, 2022 -
Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1
I don't want Ainsleigh to be an unlikable character. She's just a person with a vice that helps her cope with her mentally and physically abusive mother. Best person I ...
Jan 23, 2022 -
Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1
Thank you for reading! I'm thinking this story is going to mainly focus on these Gifts and how they are not 'gifts' at all, because they actually ruin peoples lives. ...
Jan 23, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 10 Part 2 & Chapter 11 Part 1)
Hello! I do apologise that this chunk feels a bit cut off with the two halves. The next part of chapter 11 is one long scene so I wanted to ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1
Thank you! Yes, I want both characters to be very secretive towards each other and revealing their backstories slowly throughout the story. There will be romance within the story but ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 1)
Hello! Glad to have you back! I thought Kaspar mentioning that they'll head to Wallace's first would be enough for the reader to understand the shift in setting but I'll ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: What's Wrong With Male Tears?
It reads much better! Glad you're happier with it :D
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 10 Part 1)
This whole story is very much about how Wallace has sort of accidentally become the central part of a much bigger issue - and how sometimes, being the 'main character' ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 10 Part 1)
Thank you! So glad you like it! Wallace has been a delight to write, it just makes me feel so happy to know people like him too :D As this ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 2)
Thank you for continuing with the story, I'm glad you're enjoying! Wallace is surrounded by many people who are open and honest by nature, which does just highlight how Wallace ...
Jan 5, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 2)
This part shows just how self-involved Wallace is. There is a much bigger picture that he is not privy to, if on purpose or by accident. He is so wrapped ...
Jan 5, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 1)
This chapter is a lot shorter than the others, and you're right, this is sort of a calm before the storm. Wallace is definitely full of 'Wally-isms' XD I'm glad ...
Dec 26, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 1)
Glad you're enjoying my novel! Thanks for the review!
Dec 26, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 8 Part 2)
I never really considered Kaspar to me a parental figure to Wallace but I do see it. Wallace is a person who likes to give the impression that he has ...
Dec 20, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 8 Part 2)
Thanks for the little review, I hope you do go back and read the other chapters! :D This far into the story, I'm only really catering to my loyal readers, ...
Dec 15, 2021
