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Re: Him
Thank you! People keep asking me to write more of this but I have absolutely no idea how I could continue :P The rating seems to be an issue but ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Him
Thank you :D I went back and forth between E and 12 but I thought because it's all very vague it could pass as E so I think I'll keep ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 8
I'll make those adjustments :) Thank you! It took me a while XD He's just got so many different levels so he's a hard character to keep control of :P ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 7
Oh and with Nico, he is a bit all over the place at the moment but when you learn his backstory and he has more page-time, you'll understand why he ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 7
Thank you for your wonderful review! I wanted to go into detail about what you've said but it won't let me do a long reply -.- But basically, you haven't ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 6
Here at last! Haha :P Thank you so much! This chapter was super hard to write, trying to get into the mind of someone who doesn't really remember how to ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 7
Damn bloody typos! I was doing so well :( I think it's because I only edited this chapter once. It usual takes me several attempts to catch everything XD I'm ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 6
Hello! Thank you so much! I'm really trying to write a vampire story that even people who don't usually like them can enjoy :) I'm glad you find it refreshing ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 6
Thank you :D Yeah, the bit about her not burning is like the bit in the shower, she is sort of self-harming in the shower scene because she's purposely hurting ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)
It's mentioned in Chapter 4 when Evie is talking to the cleaner men that she doesn't care about her own death. She says, 'I know there is no point in ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)
I'm sorry I sound super defensive XD I guess being a vampire lover, I get more about the typical vampire and as you said yourself, you don't really read a ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)
(sorry it didn't come out in paragraphs, I've copied from Word in case it gets messed up again) The Rage happened because vamps thought that they were feeding themselves with ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)
I just wrote a bloody massive long reply and the site didn%u2019t let me send it! FFS, I%u2019m so pissed. Anyway, calming breaths. Let%u2019s hope I remember everything I said. ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 4
Hellloooo! Sorry for the late reply, I've been on holiday. No need to go back and review the old chapters, unless there are things you really want to point out ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2
Haha, thank you! Much appreciated! I seem to get that reaction quite a lot, which I love! I was really hoping this story would be one even someone who isn't ...
Sep 20, 2014
