MissGangamash

Thank you so much! This is the first time doing a first person novel in a LONG time and with such a complex character as Wallace I just really want ...

Hello! I love that you are looking into the way Wallace describes things and presents himself. I have very much written him in a way so that readers can make ...

Hello! It's interesting what you've taken from this chapter and how you see Wallace and Mirabelle's relationship. It is the complete opposite to how MailicedeNamedy sees it XD But I ...

The majority of the novel is written in past-present, which is the timeline of Kaspar visiting Wallace in this chapter (It's Wallace, not Walter XD) There is flashbacks throughout (like ...

I'm glad the transitions from different timelines run smoothly, as this is pretty much the format throughout the novel and I was worried people may not be able to adjust ...

Hello! I see your point of making this a prologue but throughout the story Wallace will be referring back to the time that he has breezed through in this part ...

Hello! I'm glad Wallace and Mirabelle's friendship is being well received. I do think they fit together rather perfectly. They are just two people who understand each other, and to ...

Hello again! Don't worry, this is not the end of Mirabelle! This is historical fantasy - I know the tag says fiction but there is no just 'history' tag. I ...

Hello! The switch from far past to present past is intentional. As this is his biography there are a few times where he will flash back to fill in gaps. ...

Thank you for your in-depth review. And you hit the nail on the head! The first chapter is just him summing up what happened to get him to get him ...

Hey! This is historical fantasy, all of the characters and places are my own. This book is actually set out as if it is Wallace Treager's biography. He is in ...

Thank you so much! This character means so much to me so I really want to do him justice. Mirabelle is one of the main characters of the story so ...

Thank you for your review! Glad you found it intriguing and powerful. Never trust a tidy man XD

Thank you so much for your review! Glad it was impactful and realistic. I've been in situations like the scene at the table (thankfully not for the same reason) but ...

Thank you for your review! I'm glad it seems realistic - the last thing I wanted to do was make a caricature of a very serious issue. I'll have a ...