MissGamer8

The beginning rhyme is a little off. The lines don't rhyme at all, and there are parts in there that don't seem to work with each other. It needs a ...

Soo. . . I like this. The beginning I didn't understand that this was talking about a girl then bang, A girl appears. Interesting. . . the rhyming works, but ...

The Changing New Year's By: MissGamer8 It was an hour until midnight on New Year's Eve. Riley was on her porch, alone, watching the early fireworks light up the black ...

yea, I might have to edit it, I didn't notice when I posted it that it's didn't separate the verses. It's not my best work. My other lyrics; The Perfect ...

Why My Heart Beats by: MissGamer8 Sometimes it's difficult to get through the day With all life's ups and downs But I know when I get home You'll be waiting ...

The Perfect Kiss In This Fantasy By: MissGamer8 It’s Friday night The moon is bright We’re standing at my door You look at me with your hazel eyes How can ...

My first real review: I think that it sounds great except for one thing; other than spelling... the use of searing in the beginning. I feel that it sounds too ...