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Re: Inside
I'd agree, this poem repeats too much. But I think reworking it, it could be a good poem. I like the emotion put in the poem. And a suggest: change ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Lovingly
I'm agreeing with the last post about the "lovely, lovely" part of the song. It doesnt seem to fit in very well. Now format: I cant find the chorus. Now ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Light Up (My World)
hmmm... I'll have to agree with the last person but there are a few things that have me confused. Its that you change your rhyming scheme. Kind of like you ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Light Up (My World)
hmmm... I'll have to agree with the last person but there are a few things that have me confused. Its that you change your rhyming scheme. Kind of like you ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Good Soul
*I see these lyrics with a piano accomplishing it. So if you can, imagine a piano playing! Good Soul by: MissGamer8 I'm falling fast I'm not stopping How long will ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Hopeful
Eva I told Logan my short life story, there wasn't much to say. Jupiter left then nurses came in and told us to go back to our cells, it was ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Stone Heart
This is the second set of lyrics I've ever wrote. Wrote them the next day after writing 'Without You In My Life'. Stone Heart by: MissGamer8 We were walking on ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Without You In My Life
These are the first lyrics I've ever wrote. I wrote it right after a guy regretted me in 8th grade. Without You In My Life by: MissGamer8 It was late ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Kiss In This Fantasy
This song was inspired by Taylor Swift. She's my favorite singer.
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Laundry Love
This story is good, but it's incomplete! I want to read what happens next! So finish! Lol, it's a pretty good start to a romance story! Nice
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Fearless (Edited)
Just a comment to Suzanne: It's called Fearless because of the very last line is from the song Fearless by Taylor Swift. Okay, since you already know about the grammar ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Hopeful
Eva I opened my mouth to say something to Logan but the door opened and Renee appeared. "Eva, you need to come with me," she said. I shot Logan and ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Hopeful
Eva "Yes," I said, "I do hope I like talking with you guys. How long have you been here?" She shrugged. "We've all mostly been here our whole lives. It ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Hopeful
Eva I'm locked in my cell again. The nurse had already came and gave me my meds. I'm completely calm and relaxed. I'm laying on my cot, humming a tune, ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Hopeful
I know I'm a little late but anyways. . . Character Profile Name: Eva Tears or Child 71 Age (anywhere from infant to almost dead): 15 Background (history): Been here ...
May 22, 2010
