Miss*Mary

My eyes filled with tears I cannot shed, my arms cry instead there crimson tears. Wanting to die with nowhere to hide, my only way out is to bleed. Why ...

I can really sense the emotion behind the words...not sure what the meaning is supposed to be...but I get the hint that its like people who say that they are ...

Okay...this is my first poem, so I want to know what you honestly think. :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Gasp! The knife falls, upon upturned flesh. the scar--bright and r

Its really easy to relate to, which in my opinion makes it good, but it is a little hard to follow and is kinda confusing. You might think about rewording ...

Its a meaningful piece of work. A little confusing when you switched from talking about yourself (so it seemed) to talking about a second person but besides that it was ...