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Re: Goddess of Seduction
Your skin is soft supple and youthful. You must have been sent upon wings of a dove, For you resemble Aphrodite the Goddess of love. With a hidden talent which ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Bad Things
The Bad Things drove me out of the covers, along with my pregnant bladder, to the hallway; sour and unwelcoming. Night’s Breath He he You are only 13 How could ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Book of Shadows-Prologue
MORE! I read it through Now write more to it! finish the story Please! Great job! there are some flaws but I hardly noticed them as I was completely Drawn ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Nectar of the Gods
Great Greek Myth Coming to life again! Eros and Psyche is my all time Favourite Greek myth "The God of Love and the Goddess of Soul were wed. And they ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Sherry
"Oh, my dearest Sherry how I miss you. No words can replenish the words the emptiness I try so hard to hide With you I knew I had a friend ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: A Face by Many Names
Wow Again you Captured my Attention And especially since it concerns Religion I am A Christian but this poem makes sense to me on so many levels I always try ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Howzit ;)
I don't like being a newbie it Makes you seem inexperienced But that's just Me lol I am From South Africa As you would probably see On my Profile I ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Tomorrow...
Utterly Beautiful! What can I say to really give it any Justice? i like The poem Then the Story afterwards You truly Know what To say I hope to one ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
These are Just Snippets of the Book I am Currently working on Now bare in mind I am new to this sort of writing I NEED FEEDBACK in order to ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: For Bee
Ooh wow Okay so I Have to Review others posts So I was told as a Golden rule anyway after reading your title "for Bee" i thought it was going ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: My mother
I have Amended it now with new words and Meaning is It Better or worse? Does it still keep to the pattern and flow? or is it completely out of ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: My mother
OH! wow thanks so Much GUYS! Other people just Mocked me for not using Correct Punctuation or Grammar I would Like to state for the Record That I Am Not ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Repentance
Thank You Both! Adrian My message was not meant to be muddling it was A message simply to ask a Loved One for forgiveness for A sin he/she Committed! Also ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Repentance
REPENTANCE As the Ephemera wilts and dies alone in solitude It's petals falling slowly swiftly softly to the ground so do I feel the isolation of long lost love, full ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: My mother
My mother: From the womb whence we came you passed along love and knowledge for us to inherit One day we too shall give unto our children The same love ...
Oct 16, 2008
