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Re: Mahatma's Grief
As I read it I felt empathy for their plight you Did an awesome Job hopefully others won't be offended Not that i think they will but you never really ...
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Re: The Bad Things
Ooh yeah Sorry! lol it was late and my eyes were sore Forgive me lol Sorry I see now on your Profile You ARE 15! lol aah well we GET ...
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Re: Slamming Doors and Broken Hearts
Slamming Doors and broken hearts Pounded pillows torn apart Hate and words, no understanding All the while calm silence reigns Oh yeah I understand this all to well Believe me! ...
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Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
"It pretty good for a rough start. What you might want to do is have a little more character development. I didn't really know the characters. But don't give up, ...
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Re: Forgotten Prayer
Thanks You errtu2 I forget sometimes THAT not all People are religious OR share the same views as I do Next time i shall hold my tongue maybe some day ...
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Re: Goddess of Seduction
Okay I will do! thanks again!
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Re: Goddess of Seduction
Thank you! i appreciate your reply I was beginning to feel like maybe this was another Kak poem of mine LOL kak (crap, shit , really bad lol) Well you ...
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Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
Okay So I take It that No one likes this? Fine i will scrap it along with other pieces of mine Well i came On here to get honest advice ...
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Re: Forgotten Prayer
Not one reply? Was It that BAD? Geez .. I just wrote it from the heart And hoped others would like it and spread the message behind it aah well ...
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Re: For all Eternity - Prologue
Harsh? There can be no Harsh words uttered from me! I loved reading this It took me 5 Min's in total but I loved every minute of it continue the ...
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Re: Forgotten Prayer
The Forgotten prayer Many will follow in the footsteps of the past never truly knowing what lies ahead ooh and the pain and suffering of the millions shall not sway ...
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Re: I hate my poems
Ironic yes Kak(shit) NO! Someday I’ll stop, And save us the pain. Myself the humiliation, And your soul the drain. I enjoyed the Pun you So obviously conveyed here Lol ...
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Re: To Save the World
Name: Shard ( will come up with a better name later lol) Age: 18 Gender: Male Element: Ice Ability: Able to freeze from great distances Form Ice shards and throw ...
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Re: Love
aah well I got lost a bit But the end was nice My Love My Light Now that is truly Beautiful Overall i think you did a good job But ...
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Re: Suicide Song
Well for an almost "EMO" like theme i think it was really good particularly liked the phrases you used is this Supposed to be a song? it has a catchy ...
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