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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mahatma's Grief

    As I read it I felt empathy for their plight you Did an awesome Job hopefully others won't be offended Not that i think they will but you never really ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The Bad Things

    Ooh yeah Sorry! lol it was late and my eyes were sore Forgive me lol Sorry I see now on your Profile You ARE 15! lol aah well we GET ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Slamming Doors and Broken Hearts

    Slamming Doors and broken hearts Pounded pillows torn apart Hate and words, no understanding All the while calm silence reigns Oh yeah I understand this all to well Believe me! ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger

    "It pretty good for a rough start. What you might want to do is have a little more character development. I didn't really know the characters. But don't give up, ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten Prayer

    Thanks You errtu2 I forget sometimes THAT not all People are religious OR share the same views as I do Next time i shall hold my tongue maybe some day ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Goddess of Seduction

    Okay I will do! thanks again!

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Goddess of Seduction

    Thank you! i appreciate your reply I was beginning to feel like maybe this was another Kak poem of mine LOL kak (crap, shit , really bad lol) Well you ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger

    Okay So I take It that No one likes this? Fine i will scrap it along with other pieces of mine Well i came On here to get honest advice ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten Prayer

    Not one reply? Was It that BAD? Geez .. I just wrote it from the heart And hoped others would like it and spread the message behind it aah well ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: For all Eternity - Prologue

    Harsh? There can be no Harsh words uttered from me! I loved reading this It took me 5 Min's in total but I loved every minute of it continue the ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten Prayer

    The Forgotten prayer Many will follow in the footsteps of the past never truly knowing what lies ahead ooh and the pain and suffering of the millions shall not sway ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I hate my poems

    Ironic yes Kak(shit) NO! Someday I’ll stop, And save us the pain. Myself the humiliation, And your soul the drain. I enjoyed the Pun you So obviously conveyed here Lol ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Archive Re: To Save the World

    Name: Shard ( will come up with a better name later lol) Age: 18 Gender: Male Element: Ice Ability: Able to freeze from great distances Form Ice shards and throw ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    aah well I got lost a bit But the end was nice My Love My Light Now that is truly Beautiful Overall i think you did a good job But ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suicide Song

    Well for an almost "EMO" like theme i think it was really good particularly liked the phrases you used is this Supposed to be a song? it has a catchy ...

    Oct 18, 2008


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