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Re: May the World Burn, Chapter Six
6 A t first, I had no idea what to think. He wanted me to kill someone and obviously I would never do such a thing. Then again, I may. ...
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Re: May the World Burn, Chapter Five
5 Oddly, I do not feel a thing. No crash, no significant boom, just the eerie silence that surrounds us. “What on Earth just happened?” Brea asks loudly. “The end ...
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Re: May the World Burn, Chapter Four
Hello, please read all previous chapters to prevent confusion. Please and thank you.(: ~ Misfit ~ 4 I watch helplessly as he inches closer. My mouth slacks open dumbly, and ...
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Re: Life
Dear confused self, I regret to inform you that you didn't quite... Scratch that. Regrets are senseless. Everything happened just the way it should have. Why? You are here today, ...
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Re: Days Teach Me
Days teach me To always dream However, it may never come true But that's the best way To live my life through. Days teach me To dream so high Never ...
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Re: May the World Burn, Chapter Three
Make sure to read the other two chapters to prevent unwanted confusion. Please and thank you. ~ Misfit ~ 3 As I climb into my bunk, I am cold and ...
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Re: More Than A Friend
Hello, I'm Misfit and I'll be reviewing this piece today. I really liked your work, the grammar and spelling was excellent and you had a great sense of rhythm in ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: 'Tis the Season for Reviewing, fa la la la la la la la la
I'm still pretty new and I don't know how to post links to my topic on here, but it would be great if you could review the first chapter of ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Twit's Scratch and Tear
I'm new here so I don't know how to post a link to my topic. But it's one of my chapter works titled, "May the World Burn, Chapter One". It ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: The sociopath
Weird, I actually remember reading this before on this site by you! It made me laugh, I'm into dark humor like that. I honestly see nothing wrong with your poem. ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey, could you review the first chapter of my novel? Thanks(:
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: May The World Burn, Chapter Two
You may want to read chapter one first, for you may be a tad confused. Please and thank you. --Misfit 2 Well, thanks to current events, my good mood has ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: The princess and Her Knight
Hello, I'm Misfit and I'll be reviewing this poem today. [quoteOnce upon a time There were a princess and her Knight. They loved each other, that’s right, This line sounds ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Writing
Hello there, I'm Misfit and I'll be reviewing this piece today. Before I get into the nitpicks I would like to say that I really enjoyed your poem. Sure, it ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: May the World Burn, Chapter One
Part One “From childhood's hour I have not been As others were; I have not seen As others saw; I could not bring My passions from a common spring. From ...
Dec 15, 2011
