MischiefManaged

I must give you this, you're getting better and better and I see no downfall whatsoever. But that might also be a personal notion because to me, emotions are ZE ...

Hey there! I see for someone as young as you, you seem to be very understanding. Now that's a very good thing but about the writer in you, you need ...

For Mina. "Don't you feel a bit hot? There's probably going to be very heavy rainfall in a few. Breathe in. It's a bit intoxicating, isn't it? Like petrol? Yes, ...

Thank you.

DON'T. TAKE. IT. DOWN.

Naaaiiceeee. 8D But yeah, here goes my review:- "Time in which Angie has grown up, from the girl who always wore baby-pink dresses and had her hair done in two ...

Naiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! o:

Dankie. :D

The incessant rumble of a slaughter house, The sweetest hum, The sight of a fire at long last, And the burning desires they arouse. "Please", she begged. So weak and ...

All in all, this was a touchy piece and the emotions flowed through. Imma say, very good work. The lexis, grammar, punctuation and syntax were well done. The only part ...

It's strange how amazing a person can make you feel. Like the cool humid wind blowing onto your face and the heart's wrenching desire for rain, and then the delight; ...

ShadowPrincess16, this was just any typical tragic love story. Creativity here was redundant and it is more than predictable about what's to come next. Bland, to be honest, because there's ...

lololol what the hell? Sounds so familiar hahahaha

All I'm gonna say is. I loved this one.

Thankyou!