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Re: When We Walked
I liked the imagery in this; you did a real good job. The rhythm worked with the flow so that the whole thing worked together; I like how it was ...
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Re: Capital Punishment
Prologue “I think you should keep driving, Mr Fitzallan.” The cold voice resounded beside him, followed by the click of the passenger door. Cars were starting to queue behind him, ...
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Re: Ciao
Thankyou for the welcomes everyone. I may have a look at the buddy system and maybe when I've got to grips with the site I'll consider applying for something or ...
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Re: squeak. . . . squeak
Hm, I don't understand this at all. Your structure is not the best, your gramatical spelling is terrible and the structure of your sentences could be cleaned up. I second ...
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Re: Purple Memories
Mhm, this is good, I agree with the others. I think you really have a talent for setting the scene and for creating some good imagery that makes the reader ...
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Re: Something Out There
Hm, this feels good to read. I liked how you structured it and you put a lot of thought into how you could improve it; that's real good! I kinda ...
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Re: I write haikus?
Uhm, are these all separate poems? I love Haiku poems because in their small few words, they're so beautiful and if they're done well, then they can really inspire someone ...
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Re: Ciao
Thanks for the welcome Heather :) Can I ask what the buddy system is? IS it what all of these coloured names are? Hmm, a little more about myself; well ...
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Re: Ciao
Hi, my name is Mis - or Mischief if you want to do it the hard way. I stumbled upon this site and thought, I may as well join and ...
Dec 5, 2007
