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Re: To The Stars
I really liked this, but it was sad. I don't know who lost who, or if anyone is lost at all, so that confused me slightly. You used some pretty ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/4
Been a while since the last part of my chapter. Sorry about that. Check out the rest of them, and all critiques are welcome! Enjoy. - The Heracia’s are back ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Oh Em Gee Me?
Hello, I am of course, Mischief Maker. *Peered at the name above her avatar* Oh, yes; that's me. Although, you could call me Mii-Chan or Mischief, because I'm not really ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/3
Thank you for all of the feedback you have given me so far on my earlier pieces. I'm gonna get busy touching up on them sometime soon. :) She stood ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: The Dancing Stars
Yeah, punctuation is an issue but people have already covered that. I liked this, it conjured up some great story lines and imagery, but I think you could have one; ...
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/2
I've finished this one a lot quicker than the last part, so it probably needs some going over. All suggestions are ultimately welcome, and if you're new to the story, ...
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/1
Thank you very much for the reviews so far everyone, I'm glad you've enjoyed reading this part of the story. I'm hoping that it will get very exciting and dramatic, ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/1
Sorry it's taken so long for me to post the first half of this, I've been a bit busy and I wanted this to be super good. All suggestions welcome, ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Literature Train
Hm, I really like the rhythm in this, it worked well but I think that some of the lines could be changed so that it just helps the flow along; ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Patience.
Hm, short but quite good. I liked the idea, it was pretty sweet. Not much else I can say, Mischief x
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: Secret Life
Hm, the rhythm was actually quite strange in this, but I absolutely love the idea; it's pretty original I must say and I just stumbled upon it while searching through ...
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
Phsycadelic :) Zebra 8/10
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Username above you!
Hehe 7/10
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: Capital Punishment
Thanks for the suggestions Hunter, Kylan and Kokobeans. I have to admit, it turned out to be more of a debate than a list of reviews. :) I think I ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: My Darling
Mm, this was very nice Mr. Gadi. I think the idea choice, first of all, is one of best I've read on here so far. Your imagery and the emotion ...
Dec 6, 2007