MischiefMaker

I really liked this, but it was sad. I don't know who lost who, or if anyone is lost at all, so that confused me slightly. You used some pretty ...

Been a while since the last part of my chapter. Sorry about that. Check out the rest of them, and all critiques are welcome! Enjoy. - The Heracia’s are back ...

Hello, I am of course, Mischief Maker. *Peered at the name above her avatar* Oh, yes; that's me. Although, you could call me Mii-Chan or Mischief, because I'm not really ...

Thank you for all of the feedback you have given me so far on my earlier pieces. I'm gonna get busy touching up on them sometime soon. :) She stood ...

Yeah, punctuation is an issue but people have already covered that. I liked this, it conjured up some great story lines and imagery, but I think you could have one; ...

I've finished this one a lot quicker than the last part, so it probably needs some going over. All suggestions are ultimately welcome, and if you're new to the story, ...

Thank you very much for the reviews so far everyone, I'm glad you've enjoyed reading this part of the story. I'm hoping that it will get very exciting and dramatic, ...

Sorry it's taken so long for me to post the first half of this, I've been a bit busy and I wanted this to be super good. All suggestions welcome, ...

Hm, I really like the rhythm in this, it worked well but I think that some of the lines could be changed so that it just helps the flow along; ...

Hm, short but quite good. I liked the idea, it was pretty sweet. Not much else I can say, Mischief x

Hm, the rhythm was actually quite strange in this, but I absolutely love the idea; it's pretty original I must say and I just stumbled upon it while searching through ...

Phsycadelic :) Zebra 8/10

Hehe 7/10

Thanks for the suggestions Hunter, Kylan and Kokobeans. I have to admit, it turned out to be more of a debate than a list of reviews. :) I think I ...

Mm, this was very nice Mr. Gadi. I think the idea choice, first of all, is one of best I've read on here so far. Your imagery and the emotion ...