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I liked it! it was pretty good! I thought I found a mistake. O.o; but I guess I messed up. it was just a clever rhyme! good job!

I think you meant "tapped him on the shoulder" maybe it was a premonition? that's really sad. my most ****ed up dream was the one where I was running from ...

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ahh, more chapters, more reviews I'm trying to continue reading but I only get to quick read (due to a time limit, and the fact that it's extremely late at ...

I didn't notice any errors in grammar or spelling, although if there were any in there, I probably wouldn't have noticed them anyways it has a small amount of writing ...

Yume©Zoey H. Yuki Suzumiya©Amy B. Suzumiya was born in a small town below many mountains. the people in the town had ways of mastering the art and manipulation of snow. ...

that was extremely well done, although to those who aren't very deep, they may not understand it which is why a person has said "I don't like it" because she ...

best I've seen so far! :D I don't think I have much to suggest, and I'm sorry for that though I think it wise to use some comma's maybe? if ...

this was amazing and touching. I think that you should continue to write these kinds of things. although it was very sad in a way, I think it is pretty ...

a girl was seen walking through her village, things seemed to be happening. strange things. upon arriving at the only room in the whole school, and upon entering, she found ...

a lot of people say that there is so pleasure in pain, I however must say that there may be some, the pain that Aimee felt was much worse than ...