Mintchocolateleaves

I've edited the ending to try and make the chapter make more sense, so if you want to look through it and tell me if it makes more sense, you're ...

Thanks for this review - I've edited the ending so that it's not so sudden. I also added more description (I think it'll be to your liking)

Thanks for this review - I've edited the ending so that it's not so sudden. I also added more description (I think it'll be to your liking)

Thank you for the review, I've edited the mistakes. Also, if you read over this again, I've edited the ending, so that it isn't as abrupt.