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Re: Cordelia Marie KissyMcgoo: a Mary Sue poem
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was funny, and had a meaning. What can I say? B-e-autiful work! Send me a PM if there is anything you want ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Conscience: Epilog
Under progress.
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Hero
You´ve got a very good rhythm and a good way with words! There are two things that makes this text as good as it is. First: The rhythm. Second The ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: I once knew a girl
Hi Uo! I have to say that this text was very interesting. A happy begining and a very sad ending. Your text transform into a film in my head. I ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Sorrow
Thank you Abigail_W! I´m going to post it soon, meantime, I´ll read other poems. I´m already getting tips about how to write, and I´m Very happy about it! Milo
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Sorrow
My wily thoughts gives rise to hate, a hopeless soul who´s forced by fate trapped inside a world so blind silent voices fills my mind A sacred rule is about ...
Jul 10, 2010
