MilkNCookies

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Hello, I'm Abby! I'm a golden retriever, around five years old. My family and I live in rural California on a a few hundred acres. My master farms smelly orange ...

Fantasy. Period. That's all I have to say.

MNC, here to review (first)! Chance breakfasted and paid, Hey, I never knew breakfasted was a word! The ensuing hassle left Chance nearly hopping in impatience and myself (in the ...

Maxim I was sulking in my prison cell when BANG! Gunshots fired through the building, shaking most of the convicts from their sleep. I peered through the bards as a ...

(I'm assuming I'm in, right?! I'm confused.)

Sorry these are merely snippets of the main couple, Vascom and Adrianna, I've written the rest of the script but if you like this then I'll post the rest. It ...

Can I join to make it even? (Puppy dog eyes) Oh, Sorry, I didn't realize De was in it, also. Sorry! But tell me if you have another open spot... ...

I've reviewed more today than in a month. I reviewed 4 things- that's just sad. I'm tired... Goodnight.

Thank you for the reviews, everyone!

Prologue "She is too powerful too exist in this world any longer." h H is icy breath froze in the ornate mirror. A message appeared in the condensated water. "I ...

Name: Maxim Gender: Female Animal family: Snakes. Personality: Like her animal, and can be tricky, cold, mean, and all-sound yucky. But she can also be kind and nice to some. ...

I love this!!! There are only a few things to go over, though. 1) You say 'Jeremy' entirely too often. Since there is only one main character that you would ...

Hello. I am MilkNCookies, and I will be reviewing this fine poem for you. I can't see it. It. That's sort of vague. what about something like 'the fire crinkling ...

Lily Blackness. Pure Blackness. Like the night when my mother died. Like the night I was almost killed by my father. Nothing good could come from the dark. " Lily?" ...