Milaita

This is really interesting. I hope your planning to write further and make this longer. This is quite nice. It's very detailed. Please keep writing.

Oh, wow. I really do like this. Allie sounds like she likes her job, but her boss makes it harder for her. She and Daniel would have made a very ...

This is really good. I really do like it. Keep writing. :)

Wow, your drawing is far better than any of those I've drawn. I like the eyes.

This is pretty good. Though, I do agree with MangoTango, the shadows bit confused me. Otherwise, a very good start. Keep writing, I can't wait to read the rest. :)

This is really good. I just looked over it at first, but when I got closer to the end, I decided to read it all. I like it a lot. ...

It's a novel. I want to get it published, but I do have to make corrections. :)

I agree with Thien. This work was very nice.

Oh right. I see what you mean. My writing seems to be quite childish. Though, that last sentence was most likely incorrect because of my ability to forget my punctuation ...

Well, I found this to be quite interesting. Very detailed. I found it to be interesting because the cover itself I found to be clever. I too, think that your ...

His eyes dulled as he took his last breath. Ace withdrew from his friend's corpse and tears appeared on his face. "I'll be back?! What do you mean by that?! ...