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Re: The Wave
This is good, but after you put a comma you don't capitalize. But it doesn't matter, I have some friends who does that. Other then that I didn't find anything ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Love Notes
This poem came from the heart huh? I loved this poem, I seen no errors or anything. I have no advice, this is just plain great, keep up the good ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Trapped
This is a well written piece and personaly I loved it, though I found some numbers: stream on a baking summer%u2019s day, is short lived. and Not a drop of ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: My Bloody Valentine
This was an enjoyable dark story, though it made me gag. I found no mistakes what so ever so good job!
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Alone in my head
I enjoyed this even though I like romance poems better, I only found one mistake though. "don't abandon me don't leave me alone" It's suppose to be. "Don't abandon me ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
Rat.
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Satan's Successor - Prologue
I really enjoyed this, and I found no mistakes as far as grammar and punctuation really. I'm looking forward to reading more in the future ;) keep up the good ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: The True Story of Cinderella
Wow, who knew Cinderella was such a lazy -censor-. I enjoyed this story but seen mistakes in your punctuation, but don't worry everyone makes them :). What I would do ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Cadet Challenge Chapter Four: A betrayal and a choice.
I really enjoyed this story and I really want to read more, though I found a couple spelling mistakes, but everyone makes those nothing big. I fond some spaces where ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: For Her
It's very short, I really don't like short-storys or romantic storys but this was kind of intertaining. I couldn't find any errors as far as grammar and/or puncation. Good job!
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Red Carpets
Honestly, I liked this poem even though I have no idea what it's about. I'm really into love peoms, just to point that out. Though, even though it's a good ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Me and my loneliness
Nice poem, it isn't really my type but your a good poem writer nice job and keep up the good work!
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: A short scene from my book
I enjoyed this, honestly in my eyes I haven't seen any errors or anything messed up as in grammar and puncuation. I would like to read more :).
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: I'll always be that little girl. (Oh, it'll never change)
Wow, you did a great job! I'm sure your mom will love it, I can tell this came from the heart :).
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: I'll always be that little girl. (Oh, it'll never change)
Wow, you did a great job! I'm sure your mom will love it, I can tell this came from the heart :).
Dec 12, 2011