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Re: Problem
Hi there, I liked this poem but found a couple comma use grammer errors -Look below. I tighten my coat around me, Covering my bruises and scars. Hiding them from ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: This Christmas.
Hello, I liked this poem but like dogs said you used alot of simple words. I use them to, but I correct myself by looking into the thesaurus and I ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
True. TUBM likes anime.
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
Pink is sexy. ^6/10^
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: New-ish?
Hello, and re-welcome to YWS haha. Hope you have a good time here...agian :wink:.
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
2/10...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Rate the avatar above you! [5]
8/10 :!:
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Old
Awesome, can't wait!
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: You
Hi, great poem it's very...good :). I say i've found no mistakes, grammar and puncuation wise. So your good and great job!
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Memories Part 1
Even though this is seven seconds long, I'm eager to see what happens next. I mean is something funny gonna happen, scary, happy, sci-fi like, who knows? Well I seen ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Hey - I'm a newbie!
Welcome to YWS, i'm quite new myself...kinda. But welcome, hope you have a good time here :).
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Revenge of the Wolves
Hey, I enjoyed this...prolouge alot and it really got me eager to read more! As far as I saw, i've seen no mistakes as far as grammar and punctuation so ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Attrackted Prologue
This is well written, I found no mistakes in grammar or Punctuation. But to be sure I would re-read and edit, edit edit edit. When you edit your plot could ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Someday We'll Laugh About It Cover
Honestly, I love it. The book cover goes good with the title hehe hope you win :).
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Water and Tides
I like this poem, and I found no mistakes at all but just in case I suggest you re-read and edit over and over :). Hope that helped.
Dec 13, 2011