MikaFreak123

Okay, here is a poem I wrote almost two years ago. It is a draft and I never bothered to edit it. To be honest, it brings back awful memories ...

The second chapter to my new novel, A Green Baby Named Who? , hope you like it! The following day, I felt a little weak in the legs. I wasn't ...

I LOVE the first stanza but the others seem a little pushed. But that's just me. I think poetry looks its most beautiful when all the emotion is put into ...

Wow! I really liked this. There is no real mistakes here or flaws. I really like the deep emotion of this poem. It really speaks to me and lets me ...

Hi Teneall xD I'm here to review your story! So far, I love it. The description is great, I can actually get a feel of the way the character's dream ...

I really really like this. Not only because I can relate but because of the way it is written. I like the short lines, they sort of give a "edge" ...

I like this a lot. I like how short it is, it still goes well and the ending is fab :) It's comical and good. I just have a question, ...

I think song is interesting and different. It more or less tells a whole story. I'd love to hear it with music played. I think if you added why she ...

I think I know what you are talking about here. And I sincerely hope it's not about you. I like the repeating of "This is my love" But for some ...

I love this. Even though it is sad, it's really nice. I can defiantly relate to this. The last line is my favorite (:

I love love this! It flows very well and I could almost here a little tune inside my head whilst reading this. Keep on writing (:

What in the world is a Cheese-its? :L lols

Thanks guys. I appreciate the input. I shall edit it now and see if it looks more understanding. Thank-you again :)

I like it :) I think the beginning was a bit fast. BUT I love the idea haha. I hope to see more of this story! x

Elanor, a young girl who just had her 15th birthday, is noticing some strange things in her life. Not just because her aunt is a little ab-normal, or sometimes animals ...