MikaFreak123

This is AMAZING! it actually made me feel really bad, like I could actually feel the emotions you portrayed. I love it, really.

Was it written on a whim? Or for a purpose? Say, broken heart? Or back stabbing friends? Or is it open for interpretation? Sorry if its personal. You are in ...

I actually like this. It's smooth and the flow is very nice. I wish I knew what it was about though. Just a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Character not ...

Can't you see? I'm just a mess, One good for nothing mess. I spend my days drowning in sadness, Running away from it with my madness. Who could of known, ...

This is AMAZING. I absolutely love love LOVE it! I love the description and the words you used. It was a perfect length, didn't seem too long nor; too short. ...

I like this poem but the ending repeats itself a bit much. But that's okay! To me, it seems more of a rant than a poem; but that's just my ...

Hello Miss Aimee xD I'm here to review. I can honestly say, this is a beautiful piece. But I wish I knew what it was about >_> But that is ...

She never trips, Only dances. She can walk on ice, Fire, water and glass. Nothing will hurt her, But maybe something will. At last. Why can't you see? That girl ...

Oh, what a lovely piece. I personally love the second stanza. It smoothed along great with the poem. I can't think of anything wrong with this, so that's good! I ...

Hi Teneall, I'm here to review :) This chapter was a little more fast paced then the first one. "Shut up your going to get us in trouble", I wispered ...

Hi there Shia, I am here to review :) I agree with what Grant said. This is fast paced and I'm really confused. I'm not really sure what's happening or ...

I think LDR can work but they are tiring in an emotional way. I, myself have been in many so perhaps I have an understand of both ways. I believe ...

Oh. My. God. !!! This is AMAZING. When the chapter slowly ended, I was crying "No, no no!" It felt like I was reading a published book by a famous ...

I really enjoyed this. At first I had to read over again to understand what it was about lol! (: It's different, which is a good thing. I've never read ...

I think is really good, I like the title and the repeating of I forgot the cold. But to me, it seems lacking in emotion. Like, you were writing with ...