MikaFreak123

I was completely lost for words when I felt my feet lift off the ground. I knew I had dreams about this happening and they felt SO felt, never did ...

I love the first one! When I went to my Mika concert the lights did this effect as well xD it always looks so cool and pretty haha. xxxxxxxxx

Hmm, this to me seemed a little rushed and not really taken into idea. But that's alright, writing is rewriting. I did however like some of the flow. But to ...

I really liked your flow and wording, I think you have a great way with writing words out. The only thing I didn't really like is the word "bubble" but ...

I found this kind of comical reading this inside my head. (Not meaning offense) This sounds more like a venting to me but I'm not a professional writer (none of ...

This is really really great. I love this because I can relate so much to it. I like the way you actually used the wording right and I actually thought ...

She's struggling to breathe. I don't think she can even see. Her tears may not show, But her hearts bleeds ever so. "Please, please notice me" She whispers under her ...

Amazing. I love your writings! I can just imagine this being sung right now.....and someone playing a guitar in the background, ahh what a lovely thought! Ever thought of selling ...

I can not express how amazing this is. The flow, the rhyme EVERYTHING was perfect, I can honestly relate to this too. I love it, really please keep writing in ...

Hello there, Mika. First things first, I'm not sure if posting this was wise on your part, considering the circumstances you wrote it under. One of YWS's main purposes is ...

Yes I agree, the dashes do p me off The context of this piece of art kinda reminds of Madonna's She's Not me Overall, it sounds just like a cliché ...

I wrote this about one of the worst episodes I've had before. (I have psychotic depression) The words are slowly split into my skin, I feel the blade cutting, ripping. ...

Wow, I like the imaginary in this. It's really great. I honestly can't say there wasn't a thing wrong with this, it was absolutely amazing. I could really picture everything ...

I am in no way an expert on scripts but I loved this. I really was sad to see the end, I was like screaming "no no please don't end!". ...