MightierThanTheSword

Mmmm . . . you are a very talented writer! Let's see what I can do to help you improve, even though you don't need much at all! First Story: ...

I like it! The angle that the camera is showing her is amazing! The eye looks beautiful in this picture and the details are really beautiful from that distance. Congrats! ...

I like it! The angle that the camera is showing her is amazing! The eye looks beautiful in this picture and the details are really beautiful from that distance. Congrats! ...

I really like the points you are getting at but maybe you could get to them more poetically. It sounds like a call to action rather than a poem. But ...

Great! I almost want to see it longer. What was the lie and who lied for her?

I entered this into a contest but I won't get feedback on it for a while. Please rate and review for me! Mightier than the Sword By MightierThanTheSword (a.k.a: Arianna) ...

Hi everyone! This is my first time on Young Writer's Society and I'm very excited to get some stuff posted. They told me to come here and introduce myself, soooo ...

Hi everyone! This is my first time on Young Writer's Society and I'm very excited to get some stuff posted. They told me to come here and introduce myself, soooo ...