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  • General Fiction Novels Re: I'm Not There [chapter one posted]

    Chapter One They all named themselves awful names, fake little names that no responsible parent would ever be able to name their children. There was a Dolce and a Legato ...

    Aug 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: I'm Not There [chapter one posted]

    ^^ Thank you very much, glad you liked it. And, yeah, this is all part of a larger story. Thank you for the corrections, I'll be sure to edit. Edits ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: I'm Not There [chapter one posted]

    Thank you, despite the warning in the description, for taking time out your (I'm sure) busy writing schedule. In case you were lazy and didn't read the warning, here it ...

    Aug 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Little Wonders (chapters 2&3 posted, chapter 1 re-writte

    Chapter 3: Everything You Want Me to Be There were voices in the kitchen. I opened my eyes, only slightly, and tried looking through the now fogged up lenses of ...

    Jan 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Little Wonders (chapters 2&3 posted, chapter 1 re-writte

    Chapter 2 “You really don’t mind me staying here for a while?” Jenna asked for the millionth time since Mom told her she could stay in the guest bedroom until ...

    Jan 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anti-Cheer Squad (Ch. 2 posted)

    Chapter 3: Conspiracy Theory “By the way,” Jesse started, looking up at the slowly passing New York skyscrapers as they walked down the crowded sidewalks, “why do you keep calling ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Little Wonders (chapters 2&3 posted, chapter 1 re-writte

    Nice work - it's well written, the characters make sense, and it's got the right level of description in it. Just a couple of typos: “No, I don’t think so. ...

    Nov 24, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Little Wonders (chapters 2&3 posted, chapter 1 re-writte

    This is something I started without any plot in mind, and everything started to come together. This is the story of Jenna Philips, an awkward extrovert who lives under her ...

    Nov 24, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anti-Cheer Squad (Ch. 2 posted)

    Chapter 2: Backup “Listen guys,” Catherine said, standing straight legged on top of the cement bench with her arms crossed over her chest, “we have a crisis. Thank you, Jesse, ...

    Nov 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anti-Cheer Squad (Ch. 2 posted)

    Chapter 1: Leon No one looked around when the sound of hurried, nervous running filled the hallways. A teacher barely looked up from their computer before seeing the light blonde ...

    Nov 20, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anti-Cheer Squad (Ch. 2 posted)

    Hello, all, this is a fun story of mine called Anti-Cheer Squad. It's the story of a band's rise to fame along with other difficulties of drugs, prostitutes, abuse, relationships, ...

    Nov 20, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Marionette

    Symbolic. I loved it.

    Nov 20, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Music

    Very pretty. I'm in a band, so I can understand how a strong bass can "roar".

    Nov 20, 2007


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson