Midsummer'sQueen

[ Lelio Masquerade ] Lelio sat in his private room, fiddling with one of his many assorted knives. It glinted subtly in his gloved hands, reflecting a smile with too ...

yeah! :D Name: Lelio Masquerade Age: twenty-two Gender: male Personality: sadistic, but he covers it well with fake innocence and doting smiles. Appearance: Mask and clothing: mask --> outfit --> ...

Am I allowed to be one of the brothers?

The moon shone brightly in the sky illuminating the small dirt path that guided her toward her destination. Try putting a comma after 'sky' The night was deathly silent and ...

Chapter Two Breêna “Normal is a myth,” he thought to himself . -The Shack by William P. Young When Riane opened her eyes, the world as it had been before ...

-snorts- typical school. Every teenager's personal hell. I liked this poem because it was short, sweet, and to the point. Just a liiiittle tid-bit; what is this day? that i ...

Hullo everyone! I just wanted to leave a small note about this poem(s). It is the same poem written from two points of view. The first is written from the ...

Who am I? I’m lost and cannot speak For now, in life, I’m distant and weak Unraveled and tattered are my thoughts Standing alone by the lullaby shore I’ll continue ...

mhmm, I liked this. I liked this a lot. Usually, I thought it flowed very well. It was a little short, but I think that added to its beauty. I ...

I started writing a novel/story but my laptop has stopped working so i think i'm going to lose it. Life is so unfair. I hate when that happens!

I'm actually working on something that I've had going for the past... three years, was it? ( I'm not even sure ._. ) Much has been changed since then, mostly ...

You actually gave me chills.... and now I think, I might just cry! (in happiness) I was so upset when Susan didn't get her happy-ending with the others in The ...

Hello! I have a bit of advice to give you: “Shut up” hissed Jake before Vejeta could say anymore. {excalamation point?} “You fool, you nitwit! if anyone heard us in ...

This was a very nice beginning! Wonderful job! -claps- I just have a few nitpicks, but they're really not that big: She glanced behind her and saw a Shadow, she ...

Hello! I enjoyed this quite much. It was very well written, in my opinion. Just a few nitpicks: my mother looks at me, worried and I think she asked me ...