MidnightVampire

Thanks! I know this really sucks at the time. (I first wrote it very quickly), so any critisism helps.

AAAAaaaahhhhhhh! I really don't get this. Is it sorta the thing i wouldn't get because I'm 12 (if so then i'm really sad.) Wait, is it a joke because he ...

Um.. I don't know if its any better. Maybe just because I never saw the original. There are still a few mistakes,though. (this is going to be really hard by ...

Ok, sorry I wasn't here here. I didn't get the pm till later.ok, so i shall post. katrina- I now had a slight idea how birds must feel, the wind ...

Loved it! Happy happy, I was waiting for this. Interesting thing with the tiffany thing. I've got no complaints, couldn't have any. -MV

I like the photography, maybe it has something to do with the black and white part ( ok, so it has to do a lot with the black and white ...

Ok, there's not really a way I can top everyone with all the grammer fixes and spelling and comments that people before me made.I really like this, I like how ...

One simple tip...even though u may not need it much anymore. Be creative! Wahoo creativity! Gotta love it, creativity may help you out anywhere. Write whenever, always one way to ...

Ok, I only know of one publishing place Mystic Moon Press. But there its not my genre, or at least since they haven't excepted an of my genre I don't ...

My dad's friend had to self publish a book of his - 282 pages.I don't know where though. Just saying, there's more of you out there.... me being one of ...

I'm very happy that you finished your novel. I'm very impessed that it's 303 pages. Very impressed. I'm also going to say,edit, like everyone else said. Depending on your genre ...

Wow. At first I was like 'what's so bad about her mom?'. Then the end part about the whip, I begin to see. Creepy, but I like it. PM me ...

I loved it. there arn't many words (at least not that I can think of now) that describe this (unless I pull out a thesaurus). That song would sound great, ...

Nice twist. I got a little creeped out about the heart thing, but maybe that's because I'm very visual. I sorta got the image, which -in my case- is bad, ...

I did..... I bann you for banning me! Take that!!