MidnightVampire

The Grand Canyon (i went there one summer..)

None that I know of, maybe you could look in the back pages for finished ones (you'll probably find long forgotten ones, though).

I thouhgt this was funny, something that you wouldn't see normally. As in a good thing, very creative. I dont know what else to say.

Um... shouldn't this be in the poetry section. You said it was a poem, after all. Just wonderin' ~MV

That would be interesting. Well, lets see.. do you mean to say that the riot has nothing to do with Harborville. Or do you mean it has something to do ...

yay! *Does a happy dance around house while her sister isn't looking*

Hmm.. I would say some blue dragon with ink all along it's scales and trying to relieve some poor person of writers block. Probably has a quill or something to ...

Hhhmm... should we try and see what the murderer's motives are? GostWriter gave us the clue of July 23, 1967. What I got was a street riot (I'm sure that's ...

July 23, 1967, hu? Hhhmmm, I'll go look it up on the internet. JFW1415, it's alright, Coraline probably would have been like that, just don't make her really care about ...

Ok, not the best at crits.(as you have probably noticed.) The change to me is a little odd, i don't know where it's really going. I do, however, think that ...

A girl born in october, loves Blink182, and the movie 'the nightmare before christmas'? Nice, but has a bad habbit of getting songs stuck in others head (like you just ...

Granted, but now you have a hard, job that you must attend to both days or you'll die, with a very small pay. I wish I could go swimming right ...

7/10 I do like this idea, and it has potential, the reason it's not hiegher (and maybe I incorrectly rated this) is because it's one of those ideas, that if ...

yay.. continue on! I really can't critique anything (probably because the weather outside is makeing me feel off) right now, but do continue.

I like the way GostWriter is doing this, and if you pay attention to the clues you would see that the person was warned. I'm taking GostWriter's side, sorry.