MidnightVampire

Wow. That was good, when I was reading I was sorta in a trance. The ending was perfect, dramatic (I do like dramaticness, if its not over done). I agree ...

*Artemis tries to say something that will most likely end up in them having to run away again, but Ryder stops her* Ryder: We don't bite either *a grin spreads ...

Someone who plays the guitar. Gets a's/b's in school, but gets in trouble often ('cause your special sig thingy says 'beautiful disaster'. so i guess ur pretty also.

Artemis: No! We're uh... on the- *Ryder interupts again* Ryder:No, not at all. Don't be silly. *Now whispering in Artemis's ear* And you teased me to keep my mouth shut. ...

Chocolate? What's that? Well, whatever it is, it's not around in my time. Here, have a plum also, its probable the best thing I can give you, since I'm uh....* ...

I'm guessing that this is between two worlds. Maybe about a girl who hears a voice calling her to a spot at dusk. If the cover art was good and ...

Hello, I'm Hermione and I am not a double agent.

Dream King huh? I would definetly buy it,assuming that the opening paragraph was good and all that stuff. Love the tittle. I think the only thing that would stop me from ...

sweet sweet revenge

That was really really stupid. Yet, very very funny. Made me laugh.

I would. But I dont have a novel to edit. *Looks down in shame* I dont have one finished.

Coraline Silvers- Coraline stared as the man ran away from the cops going faster and faster. People around her were trying not to stare, but Coraline couldn't help it. What ...

I think this is interesting. In a good way. It seems like something that would be in part of a bigger story. You know, one of the ones that are ...

Wow. This is really good. About a girl with bulimia, right? This flows really well, has a point, and has repitition (which is something I really love). Please continue to ...

I'm sorry... this will sound really rude... so I apologize in advance. I didn't really get it. But that may just be me.I'm not saying it isn't bad or anything, ...