MidnightVampire

yeah. that little thingy. I think it may also be word, because I tried attaching something for an critique of long work, and i wouldn't attach. So, I had to ...

Granted, but now all you can write about is how great you are *and I'm sorry, im sure your ego isn't that big.* I wish I could finish part twelve ...

Wow... I started scrolling down because I don't have the attention span to read it all. 0.0 *goes chasing after lyrical_sunshine to get out of here*

Ryder: Don't worry, I don't bite. I can't. *Shows that he has no fangs* Artemis: Finally! *Sighs relief* you tell them we're not vampires. Why can't you just tell them ...

I agree, the poem wasn't too bad. I didn't know about the rhyming, it was there, and then it wasn't. Usually, this sorta thing wouldn't bug me, but the way ...

Thanks! That gave me happiness in this day that isn't the best .Still trying to make it better though.

Because you are. Why can't I virtualize myself into the computer.....

Granted, but now everyone thinks your a freak and looks at you oddly. I wish my dad's car wasn't cursed.

the ground

Because they felt like it. when will my stupid hiccups stop!!!?

right

Wasabi ... the cat

Um... Granted? Except that you become power hungry and you're killed by the person you love. I wish my nightmares weren't getting worse...*Thanks Madhatter it actually started happening*

You remind me of how my dad rhymes! *that brought me happiness on its own* I liked this poem, kinda peaceful, imagery was nice, even though you didn't describe much ...

I think this is original, I liked the stuttering, that's something I can imagine someone doing in these circomstances. I only have one thing that sorta bugged me... and your ...