MidnightVampire

This was hillarious...*almost dies laughing*

I critiqued this piece of yours, chocoholic: Moving to fast

It’s Saturday. On Saturday me and the girls go shopping in the city. This sentence is a little bit...chopy I guess. Maybe combine the sentence so instead of what it ...

I don't know if I can get my grandparents to do it, and my dad sure wont... but i'll turn off all the lights I can.. and I'll try to ...

Funny!

I liked this, it gave a really good message about how everyone wants to be someone else, and how they should think... and yeah, I think you get my point. ...

she is right about the dead thing, not many of us post, and we don't know where its going

I agree. It would be cool if you added some of those extra stuff *look at Snoink's message* because to me, I didn't get much of a feeling out of ...

coraline silvers- Coraline took a giant bite out of her sandwich, and started working on the homework that would be due soon Can't get a zero for homework she thought ...

Now that I go to the website, I understand. And I loose the game.

^is wrong, I watched no movie

Turn on the tv and put on the volume up so i can't hear it anymore, or go hide, depending on my mood. What would you do if you suddenly ...

"Rain, because I can have an excuse for dancing in the rain"~Ivy "Why should you care,Ivy, you little brat? your never going to get married. For me, I'd rather it ...

Why should we care about what the right question is if the fire is spreading?

So, the murderer decided it was best not to mess with fire in the hospital? I'm also a little confuzed by what you said about the girl, and not killing ...