MidnightVampire

In a way it sounds like its one of those stories that's typical. If the cover art is good, then I might read it. If the cover art isn't good, ...

Did you want us to look into your personal life?

Ok, it seems as if i am a day behind for NaPoWriMo, but no. My dad's internet is down (I'm at his house 'till Sunday and I'm at the library ...

My first wasn't the best (I will admit to the truth), it was based off a nightmare, so I didn't really expect it to be happy. My second was crap. ...

for the last poem, it had nice imagery. The ending was a bit dry though, seemed unfinished. Other than that, I liked your poem (not to mention the other two)

Here's all my poems at one time (because I didn't make a thread at first). The third one is the only one I really like. The other two are not ...

OOooo! I'm in (I hope I actually do try at least.)I'll have to post todays work tomorrow, but I'll write one tonight.So, if we post it in the NaPoWriMo section, ...

Wait... do they all have to be on one topic... I'm terrible confuzzled.

I had just switched to my ELT writing class and my teacher was showing us this thing that said 101 tips to be a better writer (from this site) and ...

Today seems like the first day of summer here... but with my weather if I wait 5 minutes it might change. It's supposed to snow starting at midnight and rain ...

This was an ok piece, had nice imagery. The ending was a little off, and seemed to through the poem in a different direction. Change the ending to something that ...

I loved this. Loved it loved it loved. You got me hooked after you said 'and we watched as the first bomb dropped.' I also like how it took the ...

:shock: Space out your paragraphs. I started reading it, trying to ignore it, but then there was the punctuation. If you fix these things, then I will begin to critique ...

this is good, I'd watch your spelling, because its a little harder to read. It brings a new meaning to M.I.A., i think it would be nice if you could ...

I liked this poem, its hard to reach a vagueness, but still have reality. And, yes, I have had a vivid nightmare. quite frequently, actually. Keep writing poetry, ~MV