MidnightVampire

#4's layout was a little distracting to me, so it took me a few times to reread it and figure out what the poem was actually saying. The others were ...

I liked Poem #7 the best, but I have a question. What are the 1 and 2 and 3 for on Poem #9? *if its obvious I will surly feel ...

Poem#8 :I wrote a Symphony Date: April 8th Time: 9:54 PM You told me to write a piece inspired by rain, the next day I gave you two measly lines. ...

You have to write more! These are really, really good. 1- I loved the ending, and the metaphors, you may have written three today (which is hard for me to ...

A sailor!

While a fire is starting to get bigger?

Thanks! The quotation marks kinda bug me too, I must admit. Poem #7: Raining Ideas Date: April 7th Time: 8:42PM The pen is stuck in your hands, Stuck hovering over ...

april 7th; This poem had some really good imagery, I could see the little bridge with the faded wizard. It took me a little while to get the last stanza, ...

This is a good poem. Few things though: 1. use caps instead of all caps. people tend to get distracted by them 2.When the lines are 'Well I say you ...

Ack! It's spam! Some punctuaton would make this poem a lot easier to read (also taking away the caps.)If you put a little rhythm in this (as someone already mentioned), ...

Here's poem # 6! (I forgot to post it, but I did write it last night, at 9:19PM.) Poem #6: Garage sale of memories Date: April 6th Time: 9:19 PM ...

Thanks! I'll probably do my editing later. I really apreciate the advice, always nice to have it. (my dad's internet is back up by the way) Here's my fifth poem: ...

I liked that 2nd photo, it was really cool looking. I also like the second photo on the second set, its cool looking. I seem to like the number two...

I liked them all, but I loved the last photo. i couldn't see much of her features besides her eyes (which were awsome looking)

Hello. I'm Jerimiah, and I ended up cursing the rest of my family.