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Re: Dreamscape- Prolouge
Man, I love this, though it may have taken you time to put that idea onto paper, it was a pretty good idea. Definitely keep going, whatever you do DON'T ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for making me lose the game!!!!
May 31, 2008 -
Re: the writer revange
Sorry, I looked up the language to just to make sure, but it said some people also spoke English, so I didn't want to insult you if you did speak ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: What would YOU do?
I'd wonder if my sister was an orange What would you do if a new government *one that is all army like, slightly currupt, and health obsessed* took over the ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: the writer revange
Ok, first of all, welcome to YWS! I'm MidnightVampire. Here are a few errors that happened a lot: 1. The tenses jump around, in one sentence it said:Sam run as ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: How do you get negative stars?
Glitches are fun, fun fun fun. Don't ya love glitches?
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for making up numbers
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Inappropriate Storybooks
Thanks Nate, I'm twelve,and I DO NOT want to have to deal wtih this. -thanks again.
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
Why don't we just go buy another bucket?
May 23, 2008 -
Re: School Trip part 2
I'm sorry if I live in the USA. p.s.-sorry. Again.
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
How come you get all the fun powers?
May 18, 2008 -
Re: School Trip part 2
Before I'm going to say anything, I would like to say (or shout) PUNCTUATION. ok there, I am done. I know some books (I only know one) does not have ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: School Trip
Mr Frigid made sure that no one else was in the room. “Yes I have done it, I made the first ever working time machine!” he shouted. “Oh, I think ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 2
I'm editing this at 9, so if I miss anything, then I'm sorry. “What‘s the note?” Ellie asked. “Oh yeah can you put this in Cassius‘ locker?” Alastrona asked giving ...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Introduce Your Writing
My first story/novel My first short story was in 3rd grade for a science project, it was really fun, actually. my first novel was titled A Broken Trance, and is ...
May 10, 2008
