MidnightVampire

Okay...this isn't exactly a review but please read anyway: Please (pretty please) don't use chat speak on YWS (not in the forums, we have no control over what you say ...

I can't give you much of a review right now (homework, gotta love it) but there's one thing.... What happened to his friend. One momment he's there and the next...poof!...he's ...

Hey! I don't recognize your username. I'm MidnightVampire. You can call me Midnight, Vamp, MV, I really don't care. It's been three days. Three days since I saw your smile. ...

OOoooh!!! Yay! I loved it! There wasn't much editing to be done besides what Cat mentioned. Perhaps you could PM me when you get the next part.

Krupp- I think we all have our own opinions. And guitargrl does have brainpower. So no saying she doesn't. Besides, what is clear to one person may not be clear ...

Hey, its MidnightVampire. I'm sorry, but you're going to get a really harsh review from me. I promise, I'm not always this harsh. And welcome to young writers society. Lucy ...

Hey, its MidnightVampire. I'm sorry, but you're going to get a really harsh review from me. I promise, I'm not always this harsh. Chapter 1 Jackson was like any other ...

I love them!! 1). I've taken a picture like this before, I liked it, and I love this one. I like the angle but it seems a little off and ...

Wow. You've already far surpassed me in my drawing skills. (even when you were eleven). I especially like the one that is not entered in a contest (the one in ...

I love it....It's really mezmerizing.. I love the giant swirl in the middle. The colors all look so well together. I would make this my bedspread (I have a multi ...

I love the 'Simple Gift of Rain', because I'm the type of person that goes outside during a giant downpour and just lyes (I'm sure there's something wrong with that ...

Sorry, but no. If it's any consolation, I'm going into high school next year. TPBM is procrastinating on homework. (can't go wrong with that)

The moonlit night held secrets of uncertainty. I love the opening sentence! A second floor apartment porch light was the only light illuminating the murky alley. Here you repeated light ...

I really like this! There's only one little thing I want to point out: Tash Melted souls and cries of pain shouting out for a desperate rain. Spirits begging for ...

Hey, I love your poem. It's really cool, and I think its really imagnitive too. I'm not sure if your using the word God as 'oh my god' or if ...