MidnightVampire

Its sorta hard to read because the lines are there any possible way you can make the lines a little shorter so its easier to read??

I started thinking 'hmm...I wonder what my characters would wear out of these options'...because they weren't much like my MC, but it was relaly cool. and entertaining.

I think three hundred and fifty pages is actually a good amount. I'll read any book from 100-800 (the most I've ever read) pages. But 900 is a little bit ...

Hey Evi! Congradulations on your first posted piece, and since you reviewed my work (and I thank you for that) I feel entitled to review yours. First of all: I ...

Hmm.... For the animal you were thinking a pet..Birds are always interesting,though a pet mouse and rat (yes, people do have pet rats) could do....but if you change your mind ...

Banned for having less than 30 reviews.

Hey! Welcome to YWS. I see your new here. I'm midnightvampie we a rule to do two reviews before posting. (2:1), so get reviewing. Also, it helps you get more ...

Major work needs to be done. I also have an account on YWU so I didn't plagarize it, I'm the same person...just to let you know. Feel free to rip ...

Hi there! I'm MidnightVampire. You can call me MV, Midnight, vamp, really doesn't matter to me. I think you should really try entering the contest. There's no harm in trying, ...

I'm late. : ( Sorry I can't properly give you a review (because it seems everyone has beaten me to it). I liked the very end, though. Oh,and I agree ...

Yeah. I guess telling you what the format is is a great way to start. Creature name Two characteristics of it (personality trait and personality trait2) What it does around ...

I can't find anything wrong with it. It was really sad, but I can't imagine it not being sad. There were a few lines that sounded just a teensy bit ...

So we had to have two lines have end rhyme and two words have alliteration. She also pulled some other freedoms from us (Like what each line has to be). ...

Hey!! Its been a while since I read your writing. Man have you improved. Sadly, this reminded me a lot like Lost. Though I've never seen the show that's what ...

Wow. I love it. There's not much for me to comment on because everyone else already has, but: The scientists went into action. Hiding the last in greenhouses and labs. ...