MidnightGladius

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far - I hope that you find the following segments satisfactory, as well :) The feeling of "super-humanity" I hadn't thought much about, but ...

Jared, Again, many thanks to you. I appreciate this greatly. I'm running out of time on this computer, so here's a quick response to your comments. 1. Noted. It's meant ...

Jared, Mucho gracias por el comentario! Thanks so much for the review :) I won't reveal my hand just yet on intentions, but I structured the two points of view ...

Great, this is what I've been looking for. To address your concerns: 1. Thanks for the usage errors - your suggestions are reasonable, and I'll see to it that those ...

Great thanks, zankoku_na_tenshi. First, let me say that I'll take everything you say to heart, and that I agree with most of those changes (especially about the commas; those always ...

Thanks for reading :) If I may suggest, please do say what you specifically didn't like about it. My friends IRL have already said that it's good - I joined ...

Ah, sorry. I've edited the original post for a link to Adobe Reader: