MidnightGladius

Intriguing... very interesting. The first thing I had to consider was: is this for real? You mentioned yourself that Mikhail's judgments couldn't be entirely reliable, but I'm wondering whether his ...

Clograbby has already made several good points, and I'll expand on a few broader questions and comments. This will ramble a bit, and it'll probably end as a slightly collected ...

Thanks for reading :) If I may suggest, please do say what you specifically didn't like about it. My friends IRL have already said that it's good - I joined ...

Ah, sorry. I've edited the original post for a link to Adobe Reader:

Hello everyone. I've been working on something for a few months now, but my readers in real life aren't the most dependable, especially for solid criticism and feedback. Here's the ...

Please delete this thread - I apologize for not reading through the regulations, and have posted this in the right subforum.

Alrighty. First, let me just say - much, much better. A lot of the things I mentioned in the prologue don't apply at all here: the grammar seemed good, the ...

I like the overall flow of the plot, but there are occasional grammatical and spelling errors that detract from the otherwise pleasant experience - for example: Irritably he scratched at ...

Hello everyone. I've always had various projects tumbling around in my head and my filing cabinet, and with high fuel prices limiting transportation this summer, I decided I might as ...

Hello everyone. I've been working on something for a few months now, but my readers in real life aren't the most dependable, especially for solid criticism and feedback. Here's the ...