MidnightGladius

A bioengineering company and a rogue government are quietly removing key world figures and are replacing them with physiologically doubled figureheads. Triple Point

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Fortunately, the local populace revolted against such an oppressive government.

A Hydralisk un-burrowed, then sniped the Shuttle. 's video on is truly . To add some amusement, put in spoilers what you intended to say. [spoiler]Xellos_Pluto's highlight video on JulyZerg ...

Alright, there's a lot of places where I get the feeling that you mean to say something, but that it just doesn't come across. I'm not the greatest at doing ...

Whenever you have spare time, kindly take a look at Triple Point, my fantasy novel-in-progress. I'm looking mainly for things that don't seem realistic to you; grammar and usage are ...

Whenever it suits you, please take a look at: I'm afraid others are a bit wary to critique due to length and complexity, so be warned :D. Look for things ...

The preface was interesting. It's a thought I've had myself on several occasions - what would prevent society from realizing that it's existing under a massive delusion? Unfortunately, with the ...

I didn't know we were allowed to bump our work... but the heck with it, here we go :) The opening conversation struck me as a bit odd. A mechanism ...

Hello, I would like to thank: - Pingu - and zankoku_na_tenshi for their reviews of Segment 1. Hopefully, when I post Segment 3, that list will be a bit longer. ...

Good writing, but one thing stood out as very, very strange. If there's a small village outside of Aquila that's within a few hours' ride from the capitol, and there's ...

Hmm, there isn't much to say beyond what clograbby already mentioned in terms of minor grammatical errors. Since this is a prologue, and you obviously have things planned out, it's ...

Great thanks, zankoku_na_tenshi. First, let me say that I'll take everything you say to heart, and that I agree with most of those changes (especially about the commas; those always ...

This is a wonderful concept of modification through collective belief. It seems that this deals with the societal treatment of belonging, and how we try to understand our place and ...

Aha, but I've already created a new topic for it in the proper subforum. For purposes of organization and general cleanliness, this one should be removed. Thanks for giving it ...