MidnightGladius

Alrighty. Here's some streaming feedback for you to dwell upon :) The hearts are "waiting" to be bled dry? Odd usage - makes it seem as if the bleeding is ...

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far - I hope that you find the following segments satisfactory, as well :) The feeling of "super-humanity" I hadn't thought much about, but ...

Jared, Again, many thanks to you. I appreciate this greatly. I'm running out of time on this computer, so here's a quick response to your comments. 1. Noted. It's meant ...

Jared, Mucho gracias por el comentario! Thanks so much for the review :) I won't reveal my hand just yet on intentions, but I structured the two points of view ...

An introspective Holocaust short from the point of view of a German middle-class civilian. Very philosophical and stirring, with a lot of symbolism and universal values. Intercept

One thing this time: binary suns. I'm not sure of how you've set this up astronomically speaking, but planets in a binary system behave very differently than those in single-star ...

A satirical pseudo-children's book (think "A Worm's Story" by Gary Larson) that pokes fun at all of the generalizations and outright errors in medieval fiction and common beliefs/misunderstandings. Of

Your voice is a bit confusing, but I think some of that is attributable to slight typos and miscellaneous errors. The advice it seems I'm giving to a lot of ...

Great, this is what I've been looking for. To address your concerns: 1. Thanks for the usage errors - your suggestions are reasonable, and I'll see to it that those ...

Wait, what? That was essentially the pervasive feeling for me. Certain things just didn't make sense, or perhaps were expressed incorrectly, or were ambiguous. One thing I do during editing ...

Where do you live, by any chance? The reason I ask is because there's a marked difference between a lower amount of crime and being told that there's a lower ...

Of course it's fine by me :D. Thanks for being so considerate and keeping me in the loop.

Yes, by a constitutional amendment. Of course, since both parties hardly want a polarized debate during an election year, no one's going to bring it up for a long, long ...

Whoa. I have no idea where you're taking this, but damn will I be keeping track of it. You've just described a highly tangible set of motives and opportunities, and ...

Intriguing. Could you please do us a favor and italicize/otherwise distinguish the parts that are inside the Golden Book? At first, I thought you had a massive typo block, and ...